I actually like that text. I like the grunge feel this has. It looks like some of the stuff i did when i first started making stuff, but much more ref...
I'm enjoying this wall. Its not overdone, makes its point, and goes home. Quality work. However, the bg text is kind of distracting. What is it anyway...
Centered text never looks good. If you're dying to keep the text, move it to an extreme against an edge, whether taht be of the screen or of the lette...