Thouroughly Chastised

are you sure?

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Yes im sure

Also, I cant submit files for some reason... I keep getting sent to the "this page cannot be displayed" site so check out this wall and tell me what you think. thanks.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6161993/

Get rid of the grid, the shard and the text and it wouldn't be bad.

FrostedFlames || Custo Admin

No problem MiFUDU. You weren't the only one to get hot under the collar over it, and my comment was not directed specifically at you, or to be taken seriously.

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Definitely get rid of the shard. As for the grid, maybe try putting it behind everything and toning down the opacity extensively (like no more than 20%).

I think I'm due for a miracle.

thanks guys

Alright heres the result. I had to post on Deviant again cause custo still wont work. Tell me what you would rate it.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6167313/

Woah. Major improvements. I'd easily give it an 80-something; points off because it's kinda hard to theme around, there are some jaggies, and because I think the grid doesn't really fit with the rest of the piece. Great job, though.

Good improvements. Lots of jaggies though. I like the color and texture. I'd give it an 81

FrostedFlames || Custo Admin

Definitely some good improvement on this one.

I think every now and again it's good to know you can still attract women.

The problem is, as is the problem with 95% of the walls here, is that it's not creative enough.

We have these wonderful tools and we tend to let them do all the work.

Let's see some thing handmade, something from you. What's there is not bad, but what would make it different?

Step outside the false boundaries you've placed yourself in.

Good luck.

good advice c.27. I will take that in mind for my next works and i hope everyone takes a look at this thread just to read that.

"Step outside the false boundaries you've placed yourself in."

To build on that . . . . . go beyond the limits of thinkable thought. ;-)

LTD collossus, was that confucius of something.
Easiest way to get a sub to stay is for it to be original [that always helps] and nutting futs. do something different if it means a gradient make it one hell of a gradient. if there's one thing i've learnt while being here on this community its we don't publish POS [i think thats the reason why none of my subs have made it, thats why i stopped submitting too]. darksheer has done some awesome mods to this site in the forms of layout and features since he's been back, lets sub some equally worthy content to with it. okay.

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The journey of a thousand miles starts with one step ... but generally speaking everyone needs a pee-stop after about 150 miles.