Ok, the center is cool, the rest isn't. The lines, text, and white space just kills this "could be" awesome piece.

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like rkenshin said, it has some good things, and some bad things. first, try creating a version in which the focal area actually occupies all of the screen area, instead of being framed. try removing the text too. you might want to have multiple versions of it when you submit should you decide to update it. also, another quick suggestion, if you want to keep it framed, try using black borders instead.

when i first saw this, i didn't notice the white framing against the white area in custo and thought it would make an amazing dual screen wall.