Artist's Note
i've decided that i like this metal look, so i made this. total time put into wall: 1 hr. made completely in ps7. please review constructively.
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The metal part is nice, the design of the wall however is lacking in the sense that the emptiness does'nt work so well with the main feature. What would give this a big boost is if you had a larger font style perhaps in the middle to even things out a bit.
Sat, Mar 15th at 07:40am (6 years ago)
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One thing you could do is flip the entire thing horizontally. An easy thing to do with big benefit. I'll explain. The upper left corner is a more comfortable place than the upper right corner. The upper left corner is where the text begins on a page in NA cultures. Upper right isn't anything. Okay, next. The typo in the corner doesn't seem like a part of the wallpaper. Make it a part. Next... the tentacles would look better is you drew them freehand, unless you're not great at that. If you have trouble with freehand stuff, just remember to make more subtle curves. They would look best long & not as zig-zaggish. If they made a nice subtle "s" curve, that'd be superb. Last, make them going the same general direction, but at varying lengths. Don't be afraid to overlap them. Experiment with it. :) Anetalaya: Umm? What you just said directly contradicted a lot of things I've been taught. I'd like to know which is correct; care to go into detail?
Fri, Mar 14th at 11:34pm (6 years ago)
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look at me, i give crappy reviews...
Sat, Mar 15th at 12:14am (6 years ago)
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dude. i think your 1% done. needs alot more.
Sat, Mar 15th at 12:14am (6 years ago)
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I gues you are working on a minimalistic style, but it needs work. something is not working here. @knuff: the upper right corner is the main focus on a plane, if you need someting to be seen, that's the place for that element. Update: If you want that explained, sent me an email an I'll explain it to you, is too long to explain here.
Sat, Mar 15th at 10:25am (6 years ago)
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the thumb nail looks awesome, but when I took a closer look it really doesnt look like metal at all. You should try getting better at artistic detail before you submit anything else :\ Dont take that the wrong way, but seriously, this is lacking and a weak example of what you can do.
Sat, Mar 15th at 11:43am (6 years ago)
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What the hack, you need to do more with this!
Sat, Mar 15th at 03:34pm (6 years ago)
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tentacle tutorial with the brushed metal tutorial
Sat, Mar 15th at 05:00pm (6 years ago)
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This looks good, except the weird thing going on at the top right. You should make it look like polished metal. Smoother, and make it blend in a bit better to the grey. Hit me up when you do something with this. I really like this tho.
Sun, Mar 16th at 03:18am (6 years ago)
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A simple photoshop metal texture won't cut it.
Sun, Mar 16th at 10:48pm (6 years ago)
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lines. wavey lines. photoshop wavey lines. photoshop wavey lines on a gradient background. add more content and things to look at, and the score will rise.
Wed, Mar 19th at 12:44am (6 years ago)
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i think that this is one of my better works...i've never made walls before, and i can't find many good tutorials, and when i do, i don't know how to implement them into a wall.