Text it the top right doesn't work. I say make the helicopter bigger. I dont like the colors. Reminds me more of liqachu more than colossus' style. Nice job.

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looks much like colossus' style, if you kick out that _horrible_ text up right and improve the helicopter, it would be an acceptable wall.

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I agree with hermik about the text. it's an interesting style to delve into, but i'd try to refine the work until you have it down pretty well.

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love it.. love the helicopter. ditch the type edit: maybe a color pack?

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The text does ruin it somewhat and it *is* very much in the Colussus style... but hey, at least it's not traced :p

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looks nice, ya remove the text upper right, also i think its slightly too empty. id also change or do something with that grey vector shape upper left. great start tho :)

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usually i don´t do that. But for you i will take down my pants. In my eyes. seeing it without trendyness... motivation or inspiration this is KICK @55!! i agree about the text. work on it and you will be on my desktop :: hey.. don´t laugh! be quiet and look at this :: http://www.customize.org/details/24105

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uh...imrik, rofl........ahahahahahahahahahaha

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LOL @ Imrik, and @ hash :-)

-pants.

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i love this, the colors are beautiful, the vector/whatever stuff looks awesome, and the composition fits very nicely

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i'd like this if those clouds weren't there,.. they're just a weird color. too noticeable

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I too throw down my pants.