very interesting idea. the colors are appealing without going overboard on the blinding white. I'd work a bit more on the 2d and integration of the photo into the piece.

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OK. Combining photography with 2D is actually one of the trickier things to do - so much depends on the original photo. I can see where you're going with this photo but it doesn't gell together very well because the interface between the photo and the 2D is too abrupt. There are several ways of getting round this - you can for instance echo the main photo element, but this time in a 2D way, so you kind of have a link between photo and 2D. Or you can do something as simple as adding a shadow to part of the photo (the legs would be the obvious choice here). Or you can do something as simple as a 1-pixel stretch on the bottom of the legs. All those would link everything up. I think the 2D could use some work too - it's something I've been fairly accused of myself, in that it's too large. Be interested to see how your new style progresses, it shows great promise.

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i don't like the hand-drawn-ish looking circles. they mess with the clean cut 2D work.

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" i know that... now he just needs to know how to put things on the paper" i am on here with the uptown boy. the cut out is visable and bla bla... but hey. that´s practicing. you can do that. you´ll do it noizze. it´s a progress of practicing.. like all the other things. good luck.

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i think this looks kickass as it is, if you want cunstructive feedback then mine would be get rid of the stars she is holding

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The design is definitely slick..that's just plain cool.

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beautiful. you get better and better each time mate

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This is one wonderful wallpaper. I really can't think of anything to make this better, i can't really suggest a color pack because her pants are part of the picture...Great job!

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Dokt pointed out some interesting ideas, but there are plenty more. drop me a line on irc in the customize room, and I can help you out, if you'd like.

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wow, very nice noizze! love it, it does need work in some little detail, like the 2d-photo integration, wich dokt already said and one thing I don't like to much the driping, looks to hard, but that's just me

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i agree with caesar

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personally i really really like this, two things i don't like are the copyright notice in the left hand corner but that prolly wont matter and the little starts coming off the photo other than that this is very groovy keep up the good work.